God’s worst creation
I wonder ,
For what he created
Such a waste fellow.
He played ,
Many cut – throat game
With her feelings.
He gave her,
Little heart and assigned many
For breaking it
He spread ,
Warmness & love to everyone
But , he engulfed her
Like a flame.
He drenched ,
In her tear with great joy
I think ,
This Akshaya Thulasi
Is a timepass for him.
Is a wag for him
She beg , for a single mirthful day .
His favourite visual image
Is her teary eyes
And favourite aural image
Is the sound of her broken heart
He always covet for
Seeing her as broken angel
Not as jolly angel .
He showered ,
his blessings upon
each & everything in this universe
But excluded ,
Herself for no reason
Why ?…Why ? She doesn’t know..
I don’t know…..Nobody knows..
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Akshaya Thulasi
For god , all are same ,Just that we have to be in other’s place to understand what others are going through 🙂
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Thanks for these words sreesha😍
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All I can say god knows everything. Trust him 🙂
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Hi, I have nominated you for the Liebster Award. Congratulations. Please refer # https://mytravelcsp.wordpress.com/2018/09/18/liebster-award-nomination-3/
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I have updated the blog post for nominees by adding my questions …
They are as follows :-
Questions for my nominees :-
1.What inspires you to write ?
2.If you get the chance to change something in this world ,what would it be ?
3 .Your favourite book and author ?
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5.According to you ,which job should be the highest paying job in this world ?
6.Your favourite blog ?
7.Name any movie that relates with your life ?
8.How would the world of your dream look like ?
9.Which one do you prefer more ?? love or respect ??
10.Your quote of the day ?
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Okay 🤗
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Try to forget , feel as passing clouds. Of course not that much easy but have to come out and prove yourself as brave and bold by achieving your targets. That makes the opponent to feel guilty of the way he behaved.
Try to make up your mind to be with kind hearted positive people.
I too had lots of bitter experiences with those whom I trusted the most. But now no regrets. Feel like learnt a lesson from them and now trying to stay away from them. If possible read my blogs, about relatives and sadism.
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Aww !!! This means a lot to me ### very much valuable advice …..
Thanks for sharing your wisdom me .
I appreciate you for taking this much time for reading my poem & for leaving this most precious comment .
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It’s really my pleasure to visit your blog 💙
Thank you
May God bless you
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Thnk you 😊
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Moving piece!
God’s greatest creation, yes! He gave her a big heart, little minds just can’t see. She’s a delicate flower, gentleness; will make her heart bloom. I think, this Akshaya Thulasi; is a precious angel. Someday, she will come to realize; love, will be her shower of blessings!
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Oh God !!! Thank you so much –
For visiting my blog💚
For reading my poem💙
For this greatest & greatest comment 💜
I’m really happy to have this compliments
May God bless you 😍
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It was a pleasure to visit and comment! 😊 Blessings!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Hi akshaya thulasi,
I am not that good in writing reviews. Enjoyed reading ur lines. വായിച്ചപ്പോൾ വല്ലാതെ ഫീൽ ചെയ്തു. അതാണ് നിങ്ങളുടെ എഴുത്തിന്റെ വിജയവും. “His favorite visual image is her teary eyes…….” Liked this line. Was wondering how can someone be so cruel to somebody.
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Thank you so much for this comment # thanks for reading my little poem # thanks a lot 😊😊😊😊😊
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Amazing poem dear!! 💛
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Thank you so much kranti 💜 💜
It’s my pleasure to hear those words from a great writer like you
Thank a lot 😍
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Thank you so much dear for your kind words! 💛 but I think on this platform we all learning everyday so no one is great we all are similar..🤗
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Awww !!! That’s so sweet !! Your success lies in your politeness.
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A great poet you are!
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Words cannot express my feelings, nor my thanks for this comment .
Bunch of… , tons of …, millions of … , Dozen of ….. thanks to you Lekshmii 💜
May God bless you
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Dear, things will pass at the blink of an eye, welcome challenges each moment bravely for it will strengthen you…when you feel sad, just close your eyes, look within you and feel the beating of your heart, bhagavan is there always to guide you in any circumstances…keep writing, stay happy 🙂
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I wanted you to know just how grateful that I am for everything that you’ve done .grateful, grateful, grateful krishna
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This was so moving! You write so beautifully, Akshaya 🙂
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Thank you Neha Sharma 😊💜 Thanks a lot 💜
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You’re welcome, Akshaya 🙂
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Well penned ✌
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Thank youuuuu 😊
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God is never done wrong with anyone if so then that is good for our future
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Thank you for visiting & reading my blog garemasam07 💜 💜
& Then thanks for those pretty words
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Mention not dear Bsis
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Nice composition. Using own name and the baroque style in between is quite impressive. Keep it up. Regards. Jay
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Thank you sir 💜
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What a writing… You are the best writer.. what else God could make it..
Congratulations.. for this beautiful poem. 😊😊
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Thank you so much Akshay sir 😊
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You are welcome..😊😊
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😊😊😊💜🤗🤗
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Don’t be so sad, Akshaya. I am sure god has better plans for this child of his too. Just wait and watch 🙂
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Thanks a lot piyali for reading my poem & for giving this beautiful words 💜💜💜
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You are welcome 🙂
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akshaya – the one that never fade away or diminishes in Sanskrit ..ക്ഷയിക്കാത്തത്..and Thulasi..the pure and holy…and since you are that,worry not my dear…😊
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Thank you so much for those words & also for your priceless support ammu chechiiiiiiiii 💜💜💜💜
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😊💝
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Nice poem Akshaya
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Thanks sir
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You are welcome Akshaya
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Hands up akshaya.. i kill everyone who writes better sad poems than me. I hate competition and after this poem, you are far better than me.
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OMG !!!
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Our circumstances create poems , so could you please kill my problems , then , further I won’t write this kinds of poems 🤗
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Ok i will “kill” ur problems
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RIP akku mol
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Exactly………, There is some reason behind each occurrences in our life, if we are good , we hadnt done any faults..then the final victory will be ours..hope for it…it will come soon.. may God bless you Akshaya.. He had given u such an amazing character+skills…. keep going with those … which God had given to u only.. to the one and only Akshaya❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you shaiha razak for always supporting & encouraging myself 💜
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Be happy always dear😊😊😊😊
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😊😊😊ok ! Shaiha Razak
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“ഉറക്കത്തിൽ കണ്ട സ്വപ്നങ്ങൾക്കായുസ്സുണ്ടൊ?
അതുപോലെ തന്നെയാണു ദുഃഖങ്ങൾക്കും… കാലങ്ങൾ കഴിയുമ്പോൾ മറ്റാർക്കോ സംഭവിച്ചെന്നപോലെ ലാഘവത്തോടെ പറയാവുന്ന കഥകളായ് മാറുന്നു, ഇന്നിന്റെ ദുഃഖങ്ങൾ!!” #behappy 😊
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Thanks a lot for reading my poem & also for that solacing words
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Thank you so much Ajin Lal k 💜
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