A beam of darkness
with a radiant heat
Fall upon my soul
On an autumn day .
The flowers sprouted
With the fragrance of romance
And they began to cherish
In the glorious light of romantic Sun.
But darkness began to spread
over my little soul
With irksome pain of hell
And eyes were filled with mirk.
The fruit of happiness began to ripen
Through the blossom of autumn day
The whole world began to dance
In the meadow of merry .
But I – with darkened soul
Remain in the mirk of sadness
No light of merry come to break
The bounds of mournful autumn.
I don’t know
How this darkness engulfed me?
Don’t know
Why it conquered me ?
Yet ,I had learned that this darkness
Darkness fall upon my soul
Won’t be vanished through any Siva chant
Or by the fragrance of autumn
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Akshaya Thulasi 🌼
You are shining bright for us
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Outstanding akshu
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Thank you so much kashuuu
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Happy Republic Day My Dear
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Thanks you 😍
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Thank you 😍
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Welcome sister
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deeply profound and yet beautifully done
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You have made lot of followers. That’s great 🙂 I think we have a lot of good writers from kerala 🙂
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Yes
We have …
Malayalees are the best ✌️😉
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Very deep👏
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Thank you sister 😊
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Amazing and interesting 😊
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Thanks a lot 💙
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U Welcome
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Beautiful!!!!!!
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Thank youuuuuuuuu 🤗
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Beautiful ❤ Just loved it
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Thanks elder sister 😍
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Welcome dear ❤ 🙂
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This is deep! It’s so hard to see the light when you’re in that darkness. Thanks for sharing
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Thanks for this visit & for this supportive comment
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Your poem makes me want to close my eyes and dream of a perfect autumn.
Really good! 🙂
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Thank you Katherine 😍😍
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At times we tend to fall in love with the darkness. Its not to bad to do that, darkness is always avoided, feared, darkness is very lonely, it craves for love even though it only can burn in return mostly.
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Sooo true……
Thanks for this visit & for this significant comment .
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Happy Diwali.
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Same to you sir
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🙏🙏🙏
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Poignantly beautiful!!
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Thank you Kranti 🌹 🌹
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😊
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This is a lovely read. Well written!❤
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Thank you Richa 💙 💙
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It def isn’t going to vanish, if you’ve already fixed in mind that it won’t…
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But… technically , chemically , mechanically & physically life proved that it won’t be vanished through / by anything 😉😉😉
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Well, everything came to existence from nothingness if you think logically then about that big bang and stuff. So what’re the odds? 😉
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May be ….. I won’t disagree with your opinion
But according to this girl’s life , everything is moving to nothing , her owns becoming nothing for her, the veil of darkness spread over & covering her day by day .
There is no space for ‘logic’ here in her life
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Darkness is the absence of light. And the light comes from inside of us. Look deeper 🙂
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But the source of light inside her had been blocked or crushed by some cruel creatures around her .
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Again, look deeper. Find your soul, find your light. If you keep giving in to whatever you describe as the ‘cruel creatures’, then shell have to stay wherever she had always been…
Shine bright girl.
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I QUIT
Because I think I’m not eligible to cope up with you 😣😣😣.
But will come, after acquiring that eligibility ☹️☹️☹️☹️
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I wasn’t competing. 🙄
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I think sooo 🤨
If you’re not … Then accept My perceptions as true & agree with me 😜
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Oyee 😂
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😝😝😝😝😝😝😝
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Amazing ❤️
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Thanks
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Play of light and darkness coming and going in your lovely verse, beautiful Akshaya — i pray though that darkness glides away as bright Deepavalli lights bring smiles and magic to you. Stay well, my dear friend. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Lord Krishna’s Krishnapriya 💙 💙
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Soooo happy to see you back on WP 🙂 Waiting to read more of your words. 🙂
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😍😍
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Piognant yet beautiful
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Thank you sakshiiiii😍
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💝😇👌🏼
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🤗🤗🤗
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Lovely Akshaya 🤗
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Thank you 😊
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Nice write up Akshaya.. Now I see how deep poems are.. Hope the darkness goes off just like the night goes off..
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Thanks chiru for this motivational comment 😀
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it comes
and no is
so anti
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Agreed 💯
Thanks for sharing this one
Have a nice day
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hopefully too early to tell!
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😀😀😀
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This is a lovely read. Well written. 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome. 😊
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To destroy darkness, Diwali is on the way.. Happy Diwali 😊
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LOL 😀
Liked it
Thanks for reading my post
HAPPY Diwali 🍫
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A lovely write. But I do hope the darkness you described will be chases away by the brightness of your own soul
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Aww !!! Thanks a million for this lovely comment
Happy Diwali 😀
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Absolutely my pleasure. Happy Deepawali
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Interesting read📖✅TFS
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Thank you 😊
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Bravo, fragrance of romance, romantic sun, I like the word play play. Kudos.
And the ending was fab. Very well penned. 👍👍. Stay blessed, keep smiling.
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Thank you so much for stopping by !
HAve a great day 😊
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Btw there are lot parking problems in delhi, I just got reminded by “stopping by”.seriously, huge problem. Nevertheless you too have a good day ahead. 😊😊
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😀
Thanks a lot
Liked your comment very much & happy to know that you are from our Capital city .
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You are from Kerala?
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Yes I’m 😊
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I can smell it here 😁😁, the tea and coffee there. Superb!!, hrdyamaya!!
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Aww !!
That’s Soo nice yaaa
Again liked this comment too😊
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Yeah, tea and coffee is life, . 👍👍
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Yeah, I have tea in my blood. You see. 😊😊
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Oh God, No, it’s a poetic reply. 😁👍
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LOL
That’s fine 😀
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