Through the bushy eyelashes
Which had woven
lots of mesmeric dreams…….
Tears – the colourless blood
of broken heart
Spread out without her will
And decorated her bushy eyelashes
Like a raindrop
on the tip of the bushes
It may be decor
It may be irritating
It may be commiserate
But beyond all…..
It’s worse than death for her
Also traumatic for her EYELASHES
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– Akshaya Thulasi🌼
Fabulous. Of very high standard
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Outstanding 🖋
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Thank youuuuu 🤗
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Your welcome ☺
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Tears – the colourless blood
of broken heart…especially poignant expression…
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Thanks a lot 💙
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most welcome…
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This is so wonderfully composed Akshaya , it’s deep and loved the line , without her will , got the crux of it .♥️
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Thanks Muneeta💙
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Beautiful… 👌👏
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Study well 🙂
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You should write when you get time. You are a good writer friend 🙂
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Thanks brother
Thank you so much for this priceless compliment 😊
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Ezhuthokke nirthiyo? Busy ano?
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No
University exams
Thanks for remembering me & visiting my blog
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Excellent !!!
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Thank you!
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Very beautifully written.
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Thanks
Ok I’ll & it’s my pleasure
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Its my pleasure ❤ too
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Akshaya
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Please read my first post
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No words for this only 👏👏👏👏👏
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Thank youuuuu….🤗
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Stunning post
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Thank you..
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So cute that you are able to make a poem out of eyelashes. This is proper girl talk! full of emotions but sweet.
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Bundles & bundles of thanks
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Beautifully penned Akshaya. Loved it💛
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Thank you !
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Considering the poem as non-fiction for even a while is too painful to bear…
Feelings r splashed so equally over your eyelashes… beautiful!!! 👀
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This means a lot to me
Thanks for stopping by…
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My pleasure, Akshaya! 😊
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😊
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This is so beautiful Akshaya!!
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Thank you Kranti 💙🍫
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My absolute pleasure dear!! 💙💙🍫🍫🍫
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Those pangs and those tears let them flow let no pain be behold. A beautiful poem
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True..
I agree with you
& Thanks
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😊🌸
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Absolutely beautiful!❤
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Thank you Richa 🍫
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Thank you for sharing, this article is good, I thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much!
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That’s unique and so beautifully penned akshaya
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Thanks a lot chiru
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So beautiful…😊
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Thank you
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Wow! How do you come up with such imaginative poetry! Awesome! 🙂
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Thank you so much krishnapriya
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BEAUTIFUL metaphor ….👌👌
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Thanks Sakshiiiii 😍
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Poignant and vivid Akshaya, the imagery of eyelashes here is commendable!
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Thank you Tanya
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It’s my pleasure Akshaya, you did a fine job 🙂
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Hey Akshaya.. this is gorgeous.. beautifully woven words.. 😇👌🏼
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Poignant yet beautiful..
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Aww !! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙 ……Unlimited love for you
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Thanks Debika 💙💙💙💙
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😇💕
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