Afar the smiling red lips
There is a growing pain
With black lips of trauma
Can’t be noticed by no one
Can be proliferated by anyone.
The pain is growing
Without notice
Without permission
Without relief
Without reason too..
The growing pain is not the pain
Of despair in love or romance
Not the pain of financial wreck
It is the pain from beloved ones.
A gift from beloved trusted ones.
The growing Pain is sowed
By the actions of someone else
Then fatten by another someone
Then they all will pile up
Within the heart for erecting
Tears of thick red gore of pain.
There is no pain killer discovered
There is no excercise unearthed
For abating this growing pain
Can’t be amortized by the prudence
The pain will grow & grow forever.
Sometimes it is injected
Through their eyes of hatred
Through the limbs of their actions
But mostly through the lips of words
They used against us for no reason.
Words are the omnipotent weapon
We can sow the seeds of relief
We can sow the seeds of pain
Through it and can reap high yield .
But don’t use it for growing pain .
Always try to reap the fruit of relief.
Because growing pain is demise
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Akshaya Thulasi
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Sure Brother …..I will be an honour for me 💙
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👌👌👌👌
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Thank you so much 😊
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Awesome
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Thank you
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Awesome work
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully written poem Akshaya ❤
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Thank you Rameen 🌹
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My pleasure always 😊🌸🌸
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Beautiful poem! I especially like the first three lines.
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Thank youuuuuuuuu 🤗
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Hallo Akshaya
Man spürt in jedem deiner Sätze die tiefe des Schmerz und die Höhen der Erleichterung.
Das Spiel der Menschen, mit den Gefühlen, anderer Menschen.
Worte, Sätze bestimmt um Knöpfe der Emotionen zu drücken.
Schmeichelnd in böser Absicht, fragend in miterlebter Anteilnahme.
Man kann sich durch deine Sätze fühlen. Angenehm berührt oder wartend Achtsam.
Ich mag deine kurvenreich/geradlinige Ausdrucksweise.
Lg Robert
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Vielen Dank
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Very beautifully expressed…
authentic words
Well written 👍👌
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Thank you 🌼
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Very powerful. What words can do. Good poem
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Thank you so much 😍
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Lovely…..
Words…such a mystery … isn’t it?
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Yes ! brother
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Words yep. How we say it and also how we take it from others.
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Sooo true 💯…….
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That’s GREAT!!! I LOVED reading it!
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Thank you Lekshmii 💜 💜
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Amazing sis…U defined pain and explain its types and difference of feelings….. Simply awesome post sis👏👏👏💞💞🍫🍫
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Thank you sister 💙
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Beautifully said Akshaya it’s profound!! 😊
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Thank you kranti 😶
I’m always grateful to you for this infinite support 💙🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
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My absolute pleasure dear!! 🤗🍫🍫🍫🍫
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Aww !! American chocolates …. thank youuuuu🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Full of love and sweetness enjoy! 🤗
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Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu🤗🤗🤗
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It’s deep one!
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome Akshaya
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Beautifully Written … As always…! Conveyed the message very well… ofcourse.. words can act as the weapon.. which may kill one heart thousand times.., and its more powerful than a gun.. which cold kill only once..
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I appreciate your thoughtfulness shaiha as always ….
Thanks a lot for this support
Good luck
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seeds were sown
and now that you have grown
you see
with yet new ayes
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Beautiful lines
I’m always glad to have your comment
Thanks John Sir
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you are welcome. we see that gender and age need not be barriors. and we poets have much to say about the human condition. much hope for your day and life.
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Thank you so much sir 😊
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if we weep too much we creep into an eternal abyss, something s missing and like she said the distance is a protection for our hearts!
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Agreed 💯
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Lovely♥
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Thanks brother 💙
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This was wonderfully written. I loved it.
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Thank you Moushmi 🌹🌹 🌹
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Yes, the power that words have, is incredible. We must use words wisely
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Yes , we must use words wisely
Thanks for the read
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This is so profound Akshaya 😊 ……very well expressed
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Thank you so much sakshi 💐💐 💐
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My pleasure
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👏👏👏 very well expressed. The most hurtful pain are definitely from loved ones.
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True 💯
Thank you OJ💙
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You’re welcome dear
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Pain is inevitable and cannot be taken from any source of life…beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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I wonder if the saying “You always hurt the ones you love.” is true? I think so.
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I don’t know granny…. , I think I didn’t behave soooo but I don’t know how they consider my actions .
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If they love you, they have already forgiven you.
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🤗🤗🤗
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Words are a mystery always. Difficult to unfold them.. Lovely akshaya
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Thanks Deepa 💙 Thanks for plucking few minutes for reading my post from your highly tighted time schedule .
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ahhaahah.. dont say so big words. writing is my hobby.. my writing time comes after my famiy.. it was my pleasure to read akshaya.
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That’s so great of your goodness
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So deep & perfectly expressed 👌👌 Fab job👍😊
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Thank you H@rdip 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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Words are the omnipotent weapon….
Amazing line…
Well done Akshaya..☺️
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Thanks RR🍫🍫🍫🍫
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And that weapon hurts badly …like really badly
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Soo true……💯
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Very well said in such beautiful words. Words once said can’t be taken back. And so they say use wisely 😊🌸
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Thank you …
You too said very well with your thoughtfulness on the inner meaning of my poem
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My pleasure always 😊🌸
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