Along with the race of time
My memories will run out
Of your heart ……
Like names written in the sea shore
& Will vanishes from you
Forever……..
Then I will become
Some waste bundles of sand
Lies in the sea shore bootless
Under the boots of others
But may I ask.. ..
Will you ……
Please put my name
somewhere in your heart
Can’t be erased by time
Or can’t be washed out
by strong waves
Will you …. ???
It’s a request
from a finis heart
Will you ….???
Aa image engane kitty?
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From Google
വരയ്ക്കാൻ ഒരു പടം നോക്കിയപ്പോൾ കിട്ടിയതാണ്.
Actually ആ picture കണ്ടിട്ടാണ് ഈ poem എഴുതിയത്
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this is so creative!
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Thank you
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My pleasure😊
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A very beautiful and passionate poem. Deeply romantic. Your imagery is great. The sea shore and water washing everything away stand as metaphors for our emotions and feelings and also for the fragility of life with the passing of time. Thank you so much for the follow. It is highly appreciated.
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Thank you so much , this is the most precious comment I had been ever received .
Thank youuuuuuuuu🤗🤗🤗🤗🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
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You are very kindly welcome, Akshaya.
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Beautiful work. True when even hearts erase out in sandstorms of time, what need is of name to survive. A name is for the heart to be with.
Wonderful.
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True words yaaaa.. thanks for the appreciation & for this wonderful comment .
Thanks a lot
May God bless you 💙
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Hi Akshaya, this was heart-rending!
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Thank you so much much Alisha🌹
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You expressed it so beautifully and honestly!!!! Lovely!
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Thank you Angana
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This is beautiful! These are my favorite lines. 🙂
“Please put my name
somewhere in your heart”
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Thank you madam
Thanks for reading my poem 💙
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Gorgeous image…
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome…
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Beautiful expression of emotions……
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Thanks sir 😊
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You are welcome Akshaya..
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Wow. This is so beautiful. I am sure he will 😊🌸
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Thank you😃
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My pleasure
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💙
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Lovely
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Thank you Dilkash shayari 😊
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Your welcome Akshaya ji.
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Oh my! 💓 this is beautiful & lovely image too 💕✌🏾
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Thank you OJ💙
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You’re welcome dear
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AAHWWW 😮
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😉
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Lovely expression.
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Thank you Rekha 🌹
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💐💕
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Lovely lines… Just beautiful
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Thank youuuuu 🤗🤗🤗
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♥
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❤
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So beautiful!❤️
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Thank you 💙
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