Someone will come
Someone will go
Life & time will run endlessly
They won’t wait for no one.
So don’t look on to someone
Just Look on to the one – it’s you
We all are made by someone
Someone blessed us with
Eyes , Ears , tongue arms & limbs
We all are independent
Then why we depend on someone….
Why we are begging to someone …
For staying with us..
Someone will leave
Someone will stay
It’s true …..
No one will stay forever.
Don’t look on to someone
Just look on to the one – it’s you
Life is a serious game
Yes ofcourse ……..
someone’s presence is necessary
But keep in mind
someone have their entrance & exit
Someone will enter
Someone will exit
After playing their role
They will leave for no reason
So don’t look on to someone
Just look on to the one – it’s you
It’s your life , your own life
Someone will love
Someone will hurt
Be quiet , it’s quite natural in life
You always keep loving
And keep smiling
Not for someone but for you
Not by someone but by yourself
Don’t look on to someone
Just Look on to the one – it’s you
Someone is always someone
Your pain is always yours
Not someone else’s
Understand who you are
And believe in yourself
Not in someone
You are independent
We are independent
Don’t depend too much on someone
Let someone to come
Let someone to go
Remain stout
Don’t look on to someone
Just Look on to the one – it’s you
Someone is always someone
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Akshaya Thulasi 🌼
Wonderful poem… That’s so touching and reminds me a lot about past..
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Thanks a lot chiru brother
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😊😊
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👌👌👌 Reading this made me change my thinking.. ‘😇😇
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Nicely penned with very wise words. Love the wordplays of your piece such as this:
“Someone will love
Someone will hurt”
Such contrasts give your poem a lovely flow.
And these are my favorite lines:
“Your pain is always yours
Not someone else’s
Understand who you are
And believe in yourself
Not in someone
You are independent
We are independent
Don’t depend took much on someone
Let someone to come
Let someone to go
Remain stout”
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Thank you so much 🌹
May I know your good name please
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Marta.
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Ok then thank you so much Marta
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You are welcome.
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Loved the interesting wordplay in this composition. One has to read carefully through this composition to get the message. Nice write.
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Thank you Amitav 😊 thanks a million for spending your precious time in reading my post .
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Welcome 🙂
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Merci pour vos conseils. 🌴
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Bienvenue
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A beautiful poem and a great reminder indeed
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Thank you 😊
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My pleasure
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Good poem! Thank you for sharing it.
It strikes me as well crafted and emotionally moving.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Wonderfully penned! Heartfelt!❤️
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Thank you 😊
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very nice… i really like your blog…
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Thank you 😊
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Nice one
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome
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No one will stay for ever…
True…
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Yes !
We are independent , always be independent
Thanks for reading my poem
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It’s the truth
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😊🤝
Thanks for this acceptance on my poem .
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So very true!! Loved it Akshaya!!
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Thank you so much Kranti 🌹🌹🌹
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❤️🌹
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There was some who cares for u in this world
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😀😀😀😀
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U care for someone
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U care for some one who is he… u r a girl or a boy
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I’m a girl , who cares all those who need my care 😜
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Lovely poem, thanks for sharing!!… 🙂
“If you love someone, set them free. If they come back they’re yours; if they don’t, they never were.” Richard Bach
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Thank you 😊
Thanks for this visit
For reading my poem
For sharing this beautiful quote
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Thanks a million 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Brilliant 💖
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Thanks sushma 💜 💜
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This was brilliant. Absolutely well written.
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Thank you 😊
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Brilliant ……….be your own best friend 😊👌 someone will always be someone
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Thanks sakhi , thanks for reading my poem 💜🌹
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Always a pleasure 😊
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Amazing 👌👌👌too good
Keep sharing 👍😊
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Thank you H@rdip
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My pleasure 😊
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Wonderful Akshaya. True words there!
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Thank youuuuu madam , I’m really glad to receive this compliments from you
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Beautifully written poetry. ‘Someone has entrance & exit’ – so true. ✌
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Thank you OJ 💐
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My pleasure dear
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very True.. dont depend on anyone.. be independent, and its true, we cant assure that someone will be there with us always.. depends on the situations we come up with, even if they want to stay depends greatly on the situation.. and that changes, so its better to stay independent , since im a believer of God, presence of God will be there, Of Course there will be!! so never ever be alone!!
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…….saying thank you, or offering other words of appreciation, along with compliments and other grateful or kind words are not enough to express my gratitude towards you ,shaiha 🌹🌹🌹🌹
I always respect your thoughtfulness 💜💜💜💜
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Beautiful expression as always…..you create magic with words..I love the interplay…
Don’t depend on anyone..that’s what I tell the young boys n gals..get empowered..live your life..
God bless you
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Thanks for sharing this awesome comment 😊
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You are welcome Akshaya…
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True!!
Thanks for sharing this, Akshu!
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Thank you RR🌹
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SO DON’T LOOK ON TO SOMEONE
JUST LOOK ON TO THE ONE – IT’S YOU…
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Nice lines….
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Thank you Muneera 🌹
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Nice message well described
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Thank you sir 😊
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Someone is always someone!
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🤗
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Stellar words….as always ❤
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Thanks a billion for this stellar comment 😊
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Pleasure 🙂
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Stunning!! This is filled with wisdom!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Wow! Such a beautiful and positive post.
Best Wishes
Amrita
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Thank you Amrita 😊
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Bold a beautiful.. loved it.. 😇💕
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Thank you Debi 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Anytime dear.. 🤗💕
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Thank you so much…this is really an great message.. people should understand this.
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Thank you so much for spending your precious time on reading my poem . thanks a lot
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Such truthful line so beautifully worded, I love this! ✨
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Thank you Nameera , this means a lot to me 😊
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True Words especially – ” don’t depend too much on some one ” . Very Nice as always .. Keep rocking !! 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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