Hey ! I’m Red Red Rose
They love me , me too
They want to clasp me in her hands
Then I hate them.
But one day she came
With her mild hand & beating heart
Then she touched me
Then I heard her heart beats.
I peer into her eyes
Shining like diamond
No tears , but only love for him
Even her heart beats his name.
I wonder , what a love !
What a girl ! What an eyes !
Oh ! that heart beats !
I devised myself to that divine love.
I beg her to take me
As a gift for her beloved
she blinked , blinked for a minute
With great surprise.
Then she plucked me
with her mild hands
By chanting something
Within her heart .
I enjoyed it , loved it
For the first time
I sojourn with snug
Within her hands .
Suddenly , spot a variation
In her heartbeat
An alluring in her eyes
Vibration on her hands.
I saw him , her own sweetheart
Through her shining eyes
Her heartbeats proportionally
Increased as he come nearer to us.
I wonder , what a divine love
With her beating heart ,
She gifted me to him
I felt so blessed.
Now me too
This red red rose
Is a part of true and pure love
Not bounded with any boundaries.
That pretty girl immortalised
My mortal soul with her divine love
This Rose is so much thankful to her
May their love last forever and ever .
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Akshaya Thulasi
Interesting stuff to read. Keep it up.
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Soooooooo beautiful! Ah! I love it! 😊😊😊😙😙😙
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Lovely.
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Thanks 😊
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Welcome Akshaya ji.
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Oh ! that heart beats !
I devised myself to that divine love.
and this make me feel alive .
❤
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Happy to hear those lines from you 💜
Thank you so much for visiting my blog page 💜💜💜
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You are much welcome ❤ .
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Such a heart-warming narration. Loved it 🙂
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Thank you Neha Sharma…..thank you so much 💜💜💜
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my pleasure, Akshaya 🙂
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😊
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Great work Akshaya…🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹these red red roses for you❤️😘😘
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Thank so much , this is a great honour for me 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
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My pleasure dear🤗🤗
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That was beautiful.
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Thank you 😊
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It’s cool.. Great work..
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Thank youuuuu 😀
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Beautiful!
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Thank you soundarya💙
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Who is that cute little thing in your gravatar?
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Hahaha…..
Actually I don’t know who is he 🙈🙈🙈
I got that cute thing from Facebook 😜😜😜
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Oh ahahaha! 😀
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😜😜😜
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Nice poem.
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Thanks a lot savitha madam 💙💙
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Please no madam and all. Savitha is fine😊
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Ok savitha 😊😊😊
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Beautiful poem☺️☺️☺️
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Thank you shaiha razak 💙
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An amazing piece!!
Really beautiful dear..
Keep sharing
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Thanks a ton RR💙
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😊
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How beautiful
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Thank you sakshi
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My pleasure 😊
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😀
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Beautiful poem Akshaya. Love this ❤️
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Full marks
10/10
Poem + image + apt video = a perfect creation!!!
Really proud of you and this poem is way beyond my level 💙 amazing
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Thank you so much sir 😊
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